Jo toinen vuosi kun voitan kyseisen novellin kirjoituskilpailun. Lyhenne NanoWrimo tarkoittaa Nathional writing month. Olen ollut jäsen jo 8 vuotta ja nyt olen löytänyt itsestäni voimaa ja itsevarmuutta jahdata tuota taianomaista 50, 000 sanan maalia. Viime vuonna sain lähes 70,000 sanaa kasaan noin parissa viikossa ja nyt meni 11 päivää saavuttaa 50, 000 ja novelli sai päätöksen noin 60, 000 sanaan. Olen iloinen molemmista saavutuksista.
Viime vuonna päädyin hahmoihin ja taustoihin jotka olleet läsnä vuosikausia erilaisissa tarinoissa ja nettiroolipeleissä, ainoa muutos oli että päähahmoni Alexandre McGregor muuttui Scarlett McGregoriksi ja sitä myöten myös hahmo muuttui kovasti toisenlaiseksi mutta nyt hahmot löysi oikeanlaisen tarinan jolla he matkasivat maaliin, tosin tarina on yhä keskeneräinen ja odottaa jatkoa joko samaiseen novelliin tai yhteen projektiini jonne tämänkin vuoden hahmot saattavat eksyä jos en halua erillistä jatko-osaa tehdä molempiin. Tämä yhdistävä projekti on haastavampi koska siinä kerrotaan useiden hahmojen tarinaa osittain, mutta se olisi erilainen projekti joka voi jatkua ties kuinka kauan kun hahmoja tulee ja menee. Sekin voi toki muuttua radikaalisti eri ympäristöön.
Viime vuoden novelli Star crossed lovers oli minulle tunnerikas kokemus nauruineen ja itkuineen ja elävöitti minut heidän seikkailuihinsa. Tänä vuonna novellini An affair to remember seikkaili uusien hahmojen kanssa ja tiedän että novelli tarvitsee jatkossa 1-3 uusintoa saadakseen lopullisen muotonsa ehkä jopa eri päätöksellä, mutta pidän luomuksestani epätäydellisenäkin romanttisena draamana jossa seikkailevat Aensworthin riitaantuneet veljekset ja heidän yhteinen romanttinen kiinnostuksen kohde, Lucrecia Moonbell. Ehkä joskus julkaisen näitä novelleja luettavaksi teille.
Laitan alle pätkän novellin alusta, en ensimmäistä lukua koska se on suomeksi ja haluan pätkän olevan kielellä jolla muu novelli on kirjoitettu.
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It is second year as I win this particular novel writing competition. Short term NanoWrimo comes from words National writing month that takes place in every November. I have been member eight years already and now I have found from myself strength and confidence to hunt that magical 50, 000 words goal. Last year I got almost 70, 000 word written in about two weeks and now I hit 50K in eleven days and my novel had it's end in almost 60K. I am so happy about both of those victories.
Last year I ended up with characters and backgrounds that has been present to me for years in my youth in different settings and stories and internet role play games. Only change was that Alexandre McGregor turned out to be Scarlett McGregor which changed this main character much different but now my characters found rightful storyline to follow and they got to the finish line. Story is still unfinished though and waits for sequel in that same novel or in one of my other projects where my this year's nano characters might end up too if I do not want to make sequels in both novels differently. This uniting project would be more challenging as there we follow multiple character's lives in parts but it would be very different kind of project to me that could go on and on as characters comes and goes. It can change also rapidly in totally different setting.
Last year's novel Star crossed lovers was to me very emotional experience with laughs and cries and enlivened me into their adventures. This year's novel An affair to remember adventured with new character's lives and I know it need few times to overwrite it to get it's final form maybe even with different ending but I like my creation even as incomplete form of creation of romantic drama where adventures Aensworth's disputing brothers and their mutual love interest Lucrecia Moonbell. Maybe sometime I will publish these novels to you to read and criticize.
Heres piece from the beginning, not first chapter as it is still in Finnish so I prefer give you part that is in language that rest of the novel is.
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Lucrecia stared
at herself in the mirror in her bathroom, examing herself. She
reminded her mother who had passed away eight years ago. She had been
ten years old when her parents died in that terrible car accident.
From that day on she had been raised by her grandfather Charlie who
was gentleman by book. He had raised her with good manners and tight
discipline. She had studied her elementary school in catholich
boarding school in Florida and had just graduated from there.
She had hated
it all the way as she didn't like to dress up in uniform and living
in religious manners but she swallowed it all as it had been
Charlie's wish that his granddaughter would be raised in same
athmospere as his daughter. But Lucrecia had made him promise that
after graduation she would have approval to do as she saw fit her
life. Today was her birthday and her friends were going to take her
to secretive glamorous party in New York.
She sighed and
raised eyebrow at herself before putting towel around herself and
walked into her room to select red underwear and chose then black
jeans and red top. She tied her hair up and put some rock music
playing as she sat down to do her make up quickly.
”Lucrecia,
breakfast is ready, hurry up! You are going to miss your train soon!”
Charlie shouted from the kitchen. Charlie was gentle man deep inside
and had given plenty of cases to laughter in her childhood and she
cherished her time with him. But she was now adult and ready to
explore the world on herself without his guidance. She wanted to make
mistakes, fall in love deeply with totally wrong guy and be dirty,
all those things that she had been denied all these years. Well, she
had few little romances in boarding school but there was so strict
athmosphere that there was no room for playing around. She frowned as
she remembered that time she was busted from kissing her first so
called boyfriend and how she had gotten herself in detention for
that. Charlie was so unhappy with her manners that she had to spend
amost all her winter holidays inside for that mistake.
She ran to
kitchen sitting down and pouring tea to Charlie's and hers cups
politely.
”Good
morning, Charlie! How is your morning?” she asked.
”Good morning
to birthday girl and happy birthday as well indeed!” Charlie
announced politely as he sat down front of her thanking then for tea.
”As every
morning this far, marveously. I am going to spend this day with my
gents in the club and trying not to worry about your trip to New
York”, Charlie said then looking at her serious look on his face.
”Oh, you
shouldn't worry about me. I am adult now and I am able to take care
of myself you know. I have to learn how to cope by myself as I won't
stay here forever”, she replied cheerfully.
”I know, that
horrifies me nevertheless. You are adult but still so young and eager
to lose your track with all this freedom”, Charlie said.
”You should
be happy now as you can start your retirment without taking care of
me. You have earned some peace and quiet, granpa”, she said then.
”Responsibility
of you will never expire, Lucrecia. I am only one left to look after
you and as long as I live I shall look after your well being. You
aren't job I have been given, you are the legacy of our family”,
Charlie pointed out.
”I want to
make sure that your parents could be proud of you in Heaven”, he
continued then. She sighed deeply. Of course he thought everything
more deeper than she did. She was anxious to have her adventures
without thiking about what anyone might think of it.
”I will keep
that in my mind”, she answered then.
After breakfast
she packed everything she needed for her trip to New York and hurried
to train station after saying farewell to Charlie and getting nice
amount of money as birthday gift. She was so excited that she
couldn't relax at all. She called to her friend Luna who would be
picking her up from train station.
”I am in the
train. I am free to do whatever I want! Oh God I am going to faint
soon!” she said cheerfully as Luna replied.
”Happy
birthday Lucrecia! I am happy to see you again and we have tickets to
most fabulous party ever! You will have so fab time with us that you
won't ever return back to that small boring town!” Luna laughed.
”I am going
to move away as soon as possible. Charlie thinks I should get into
university and pick place that way but I think I would like to get
some silly work and just have fun for while so all open for options
here”, she said eagerly.
”Actually I
am going to move in London after summer as my studies starts there
and I have been looking for apartment that I could share with few
people. If you don't feel like staying in USA you could join me”,
Luna proposed suddenly totally new idea.
”Oh my God!
That's brilliant idea, Luna! You know my mother and Charlie is from
United kingdom and I have always dreamed of living there and get to
know my roots. I have to keep that option in my mind”, she said
excited. Luna giggled.
”Yeah, your
accent gave you away first day we met in elementary school you know”,
Luna said. They had met in elementary school while she still lived in
New York. They kept contact even after she had to move away with
Charlie and met every holiday.
”I will be at
train station when you arrive, we will chat more then, okay?” Luna
asked then.
”Defenately!
See ya!” she said and closed her phone. She sighed again and looked
our from the window. United Kingdom was out there waiting her to come
and explore all the possibities that country has to offer and it gave
her chills.


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